Castle Paradox

Misac · Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 3:05 am Post subject: Release: The Last Crusader

The Last Week i did release my game "The Last Crusader" Donwload it and tell me if you like or not
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Bob the Hamster · Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 8:48 am Post subject:

You ought to post a link: http://www.castleparadox.com/gamelist-display.php?game=784

Blue Pixel · Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 11:06 am Post subject:

ive notice u can walk on the water. u might wanna fix that.
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Setu_Firestorm · Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 4:28 am Post subject:

It depends. Are you playing as Jesus? Raspberry!

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Blue Pixel · Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 12:30 pm Post subject:

well he did have a golden cross on his head... mayby...
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Gizmog1 · Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 6:14 am Post subject:

RedMaverickZero · Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 10:32 am Post subject:

I took a stab at it. I tried to play it, I really did. But this game needs a lot of work. Things that I noticed:

-A lot of spelling errors. Is that Philip character supposed to talk like a newb?

-Phillip's color palette blends in with the background in that one fight in the forest area.

-Your enemies speed stat are set entirely too high. Phillip died instantly and the king just absorbed everything.. Not exactly fun.

-There's a shop in the town where you find the king's best explorer, and I couldn't help but notice they were giving away potions and Life bracelets for free. I know he's the king, but shouldn't he have to pay something?

-Your Map design isn't too shabby. There is definite structure and planning evident in the areas.

-Graphically, this game would probally earn itself a 1-2 on a review. I can tell you sculpted out the enimies and graphics pretty well, but they seem more like a wireframe, waiting to get filled in with the flesh and bones of the sprites. I'd consider a revamp on the graphics, preferablly all of them.

-Your hero's attack graphics don't line up with your weapon graphics. I don't know if the king has psychic power or what, but I didn't think normal people could levitate swords.

-Your color choices are a bit harsh. The colors are very bright and strain the eyes. If you decide to redo your graphics, I might suggest using a bit darker colors.

-The King's sprite blends in with the castle floorground for the most part.

-When you exit the castle, the player is kind of left wondering where they are because of the doorway. Might I suggest not making it an overhead tile. Good concept, just ineffective.

Not trying to sound mean, just trying to help you improve your game. It has potential, just.. work on everything.

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Misac · Posted: Sat Oct 21, 2006 7:38 am Post subject:

i working on these things

and my english is not much good, i dont know much about plotscript i only
have made a game over script to the end of the game, and i need help to
do better graphics, do better heros, and better enemys anyone can help me? Confused

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RedMaverickZero · Posted: Sat Oct 21, 2006 8:00 am Post subject:

If you have somebody help you with your graphics then you aren't gonna get better yourself. You need to spend some time, and practice. Find somebody on here that will look at your graphics on a one-on-one basis and give you advice.