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binoal · Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 8:01 am Post subject: Feedback?

I am making a resident evil RPG. I decided to create a sidequest where you may fight Akuma and you can learn the Hadoken by defeatiing him. I just made the walkabout and enemy sprite for Akuma, tell me what you think! dont be afraid to hurt my feelings lol it will only improve him

http://i821.photobucket.com/albums/zz138/bino_al/AkumaCustom.png
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Moogle1 · Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 9:15 am Post subject:

His legs are disproportionately small.

The larger issue is that someone who can beat up Akuma really has nothing to fear from some zombies.
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binoal · Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 9:22 am Post subject:

Do you mean small as in width or height? and he can usually ahhnilate you, but you can beat him if you get the magnum
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Newbie_Power · Joined: 04 Sep 2006 Posts: 1762

Look at his legs compared to his arms. That's what he means by proportionally.

His right arm is also noticeably smaller than his left. Ditto his right foot.

Give him an actual jaw. I know one of his sprites looks like he doesn't have a jaw (I think Alpha), but please give him an actual jaw.

Youc an use this as reference to the shape of his head.

Also, probably nothing in the Resident Evil universe could defeat Akuma, but I suppose Akuma can just suppress his strength as usual.
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TwinHamster · Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 10:51 am Post subject:

I'd probably request that you draw the character in a manner that isn't just a shrinking of the original.

binoal · Posted: Sun Jun 21, 2009 7:45 am Post subject:

lol i was trying to import that exact image as his picture but the colors messed up and i couldnt get the pallette right. i kinda suck at pixel art, but im definitly gonna try to fix up his arms legs and jaw. Thanks!
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