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Velduanga I heard there were bagels here...

Joined: 25 Jul 2003 Posts: 112 Location: A town away from White Owl, I kid you not, unless he moved.
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Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2003 9:59 pm Post subject: New Pic |
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This is Vera the daughter of God from Vicious Infinity, a long delayed game which I probably won't work on till next year(I have one tileset and a couple of concept pics). Took about 5-6 hours to do this one, but thought she was worth CGing. Once again, comments, questions, complaints?
http://members.aol.com/velduanga/misc/vera.jpg _________________ If you hit a plane with the soccer, could you afford to fix it? - Shaolin Soccer
"If it's worth shooting, it's worth shooting twice"-Tom Clancy
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Setu_Firestorm Music Composer

Joined: 26 Mar 2003 Posts: 2566 Location: Holiday. FL
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Lucier that one girl

Joined: 06 Aug 2003 Posts: 139 Location: dallas, tx
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2003 4:31 am Post subject: |
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Hm... Since MCM hasn't commented, I will. The breasts are rather close together, and considering that they are are so heavily shaded, they should probably be a bit larger in general, or else they'll just look like they pop out a lot but are small in the actual size. Also, her arms are pretty large. I'm not sure if you meant for them to look muscular, but really, they just look chubby. Seeing as her stomache and legs are so skinny, her arms should probably e somewhat thinner. And on a final note, her neck is very bulky. I suggest you bring it in some on the right side Other than that, it's a very nice picture. Your cging style is excellent. _________________ insert myspace link here. |
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Friend

Joined: 06 Feb 2003 Posts: 235 Location: California
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2003 4:43 am Post subject: |
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mmm, I think the folds look somewhat unnatural. Other than that, I dig the overall CG style. Keep up the good work :>
Friend, _________________ "I am Collins. From my position in the moon's orbit, I watched Armstrong and Aldrin land and walk on the surface. I was so close to the ground of the moon, and yet I returned without having trod upon it... I am Collins." -Friend |
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MultiColoredWizard Come back, baby! The Breastmaster

Joined: 01 Feb 2003 Posts: 1232
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2003 6:12 am Post subject: |
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Curse you, Lucy. |
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Lucier that one girl

Joined: 06 Aug 2003 Posts: 139 Location: dallas, tx
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2003 6:21 am Post subject: |
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I love you too, MCM. And yeah, Friend is right. Those folds are a bit wonky. _________________ insert myspace link here. |
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MultiColoredWizard Come back, baby! The Breastmaster

Joined: 01 Feb 2003 Posts: 1232
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2003 8:25 am Post subject: |
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I know, Lucy.
Anyways, the knees look awkward. |
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ChocoSOLDIER Ghost haunting the board
Joined: 03 Feb 2003 Posts: 279
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2003 3:54 pm Post subject: |
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The stance looks like she tried to stand on the tip of her right big toe and is now in the process of falling over.
Otherwise, pretty good. I couldn't CG if my life depended on it. Pencil art is my strength. |
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Shadowiii It's been real.

Joined: 14 Feb 2003 Posts: 2460
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2003 11:38 pm Post subject: |
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Nice Coloring. _________________ But enough talk, have at you! |
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Sorcer ...art guy...

Joined: 05 Nov 2003 Posts: 11
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Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2003 3:44 am Post subject: |
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Her form look a little masculine... She has very powerful muscles, She looks like a Female Russian Pro Wrestler..., which is not a good thing...
However, the CGing were Sugoi! You are really skilled when it comes to cging...  _________________ Yes, there were times,
I'm sure you knew.
When I bit off more than I could chew.
But through it all when there was doubt
I ate it up and spit it out.
I faced it all
And I stood tall.
And did it my way!
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Sorcer ...art guy...

Joined: 05 Nov 2003 Posts: 11
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Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2003 3:45 am Post subject: |
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And, I forgot: The Red fabric goes into the blue pantie like thing, and comes out a little too high up... Near the green... Hope you understand what I mean. _________________ Yes, there were times,
I'm sure you knew.
When I bit off more than I could chew.
But through it all when there was doubt
I ate it up and spit it out.
I faced it all
And I stood tall.
And did it my way!
- "My Way" - Frank Sinatra, Elvis Presley, Herman Brood, Paul Anka, Robbie Williams and now me. |
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Uncommon His legend will never die

Joined: 10 Mar 2003 Posts: 2503
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Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2003 3:34 pm Post subject: |
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Well, Sorcer, since you're new, I'll be easy on you. Don't revive dead threads. |
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