Castle Paradox

[Onlyoneinall]

http://www.fictionpress.com/~onlyoneinall

At least... I think they're good. Not many people review em though, so if you like any of the stories or have criticism or what not (I could use an ego boost and information on better writing), I'd like it if you'd post the review on the stories you read (you can review at the site).

There is a story about a girl whose brother makes her weight train, a story about a world where women are dominant (incomplete), there is a story based on Final Destination (but that's sort of a fanfic eh?), there is a story on a transsexual (OMFG! ), and there are also two romances (one I'm uploading that is finished, the other I'm working on now). There is also a humorous story.

I think they're all pretty good examples of good story writing... I hope you'll read and tell me what you think =]
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[Leonhart]

Esther's death in Final Destination 7 seems awfully familiar...
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The man who smiles when things go wrong has thought of someone to blame it on.
- Robert Bloch

[Gizmog1]

I admit, I haven't read farther than that yet, BUT, as a general rule of thumb when writing a fanfic, it's not a good idea to rip off a death scene from the source material beat for beat.

[Onlyoneinall]

Well, that death scene was for humorous purposes. The rest, I've done my best to make it as original as possible.
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[Leonhart]

Still, I like your style of writing in FD7. You're one persevering dude.
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The man who smiles when things go wrong has thought of someone to blame it on.
- Robert Bloch