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Flamer · Posted: Fri Nov 21, 2003 6:50 pm Post subject:

well, with drawing comes the willingness to be patient and willingness to improve... you don't seem to have either... there's many parts that do look very sketchy, that is why it looks like "funny hentai" because it looks so much like ametaur hentai, where the person was trying to imitate another hentai picture, but screwed up.

no offense or anything, but you should try take a bit more time on improving the picture rather than trying to get it huge and distorted.
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Flamer · Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2003 8:15 am Post subject:

"intimate..." pfft, more like "uncontrollably hormone infested ideas" hentai is just porn in the form of cartoon, regardless of whether it is softcore, hardcore or whatever other sick things there are.
if you think hentai is the generic "tentacle rape" then you need to broaden your horizon.

NOTE: I mean no offfense in anyway, just that it's very late at night and am about to go to bed.
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Setu_Firestorm · Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2003 8:51 am Post subject:

Heat, you always manage to frighten me. I'm not one for Hentai, and I don't approve of this.
That's just my opinion.
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Roach Lir · Joined: 08 Jul 2003 Posts: 119 Location: United Kingdom

I agree with you, Setu. Hentai, ugh! As for the drawing, it's weird. Sorry, but it's totally out of proportion.
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Megumi · Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2003 10:42 am Post subject:

*dies for lack of a tablet* Where'd you get yours? How much? I want one SO stinking bad, but I don't know that much about them.

Yeah.. um... the drawing...

Not too bad, I've seen a lot worse. I like the eyes, and hair, but the mouth is in need of some help. Mouths are NEVER perfect semicircles. Her jawline is uneven, on her left it's too wide. Decent attempt at perspective with the body, but her face seems somehow... detatched. Other than that (I know it sounds like a lot) it's pretty good. If you cut it off under the eyes, it looks really good, actually.
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Shadowiii · **It's been real.** Joined: 14 Feb 2003 Posts: 2460

1. That isn't hentai, that won't be hentai, and it isn't "funny hentai" at all. It just a picture of an anime girl in a slightly more revealing pose. If that was hentai, Cowboy Bebop would be hentai.

2. Its a decent picture, though I dont' like the proportions. Her head is too large, methinks. The flower between her breasts is...out of place.

Uh yeah. I don't look at hentai, or pornography in general, and I know what "offends" me, and that doesn't.
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Uncommon · Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2003 12:49 pm Post subject:

Yes, the fact that she isn't naked at all proves that this isn't hentai. And it's not even particularly arousing, either.

Heat · Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2003 12:59 pm Post subject:

I think it's "not proportional" because I took the picture of the drawing at a slight angle and too close to the paper.
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Heat · Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2003 1:08 pm Post subject:

Fenrir-Lunaris · **WUT** Joined: 03 Feb 2003 Posts: 1747

I've drawn pictures about 100 times worse than that, and have several hundred to boot, ergo I'm the experienced one here by default. Actually most of it consists of softcore nudes reclining on furnature or a bunch of wolfgirls doing the 'horizontal monkey dance', but that's another story altogether. Believe me when I say that's NOT hentai. The fact that the eyes aren't overwhelmingly out of proportion to the rest of her head hardly even makes it in the anime style to begin with.

Heat · Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2003 1:16 pm Post subject:

Uncommon · Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2003 2:21 pm Post subject:

Paper over a tablet? That's an interesting idea. I wish I had a tablet, that would cut about half of the time in my CGs, as a lot of it is removing incorrect pencil marks...

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