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Redmage18***
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Lets get serious and back on topic, please......
Spar, Phoenix, Max = Bird Zyrans
Giz: Black Moogle with a pink mohawk.
Famous lines: "My honeys are in the back!" "I wish that bird girl Spar was here, we could fly all into the night!" "Want to save? WELL I AIN'T THAT KIND OF MOOGLE!"
Uncommon: Minotaur Lieutenant of CN's army
Famous lines: "Don't just talk about being Awesome. Be Awesome!"
ChaosNyte: Cat Zyran wearing knight amour riding on a Chocobo. He's the General that leads the army.
Famous lines: "I shall stomp anyone that gets in my way!"
PHC: Whale, he protests to save his kind and help whales, when he's not spending time at the Surlaw (Night club)
Famous lines: "I'm protecting the whales from evil politicians!" "Come to my club the Surlaw!"
Silent Angel: Angel and beloved wife of Inferior Minion.
Famous lines: "Welcome to Castle Paradox!"
Moogle1: Moogle.
Famous Lines: None couldn't think of any.
JSH: A Kitty Loaf we run into, and the main charicter almost eats him thinking he's actual bread. Famous Lines: "I bez in tihs ally, woot?"
Inferior Minion: Griffin sculptor, builder, and founder of Castle Paradox! Famous lines: "I've been working all day" "I could sure go for a cheese burger!"
I'll post more later. 
EDIT: I just fixed all spelling errors and grammars errors. Also I seperated it so it's not so messy. Sorry..
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The Wobbler
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Redmage18***
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| Posted: Wed Oct 05, 2005 11:20 am Post subject: |
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| PHC wrote: | Please type all of the game's text into a word processor with spell check first. That was painful.
Also: "You'll be carefull to said whale!" "It is the same indeed. The Surlaw, fully of bunnies!"
What the hell? I don't want to be in this, but if I have to be at least try to make sense. These lines make no sense at all!
And Angeling? Why not just Angel? |
Thankyou and I did. I'm sorry I'll take any suggestions to what you want to say. Thankyou. I guess I should take time to write my posts. I know people don't like messy posts, so I fixed it.
If anyone doesn't like there character they may request to have a different one, and/or quote. I'm sorry if I made you look retarded, just tell me some suggestions. Please and thankyou...
EDIT: I fixed the errors...again....
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Redmage18***
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| Posted: Wed Oct 05, 2005 11:55 am Post subject: |
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| PHC wrote: | Well, "charicter" is not a word. Neither is "grammical." "bird girl Spar was hear" should use "here."
I can't believe you spelled lieutenant correctly and messed these up.
The quotes you gave me still don't make any sense and I can't tell why they would be famous. I also find the quote you gave SA offensive and misogynistic, and I'm not even a fan of her. |
Damn I'm so tired. Well I fixed it all. Also I didn't know "grammical" wasn't a word, Minnek always uses it on me when I made errors. |
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The Wobbler
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Shadowiii
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| Posted: Wed Oct 05, 2005 2:31 pm Post subject: |
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Thank you Redmage for not putting me in your monstrosity.
And Machu's reply is the best so far.
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Moogle1
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| Posted: Wed Oct 05, 2005 2:57 pm Post subject: |
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| PHC wrote: | | I can't believe you spelled lieutenant correctly and messed these up. |
Who else is laughing? Because I am laughing.
I assume SA's original line was not "Welcome to Castle Paradox"?
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Glee.
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| Posted: Wed Oct 05, 2005 3:27 pm Post subject: |
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| I'd really rather not be involved with this project, but since I'm putting you in TQ:ROJ I guess I can't complain. |
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| Posted: Wed Oct 05, 2005 8:12 pm Post subject: |
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| I want to not be a part of this. |
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Redmage18***
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| Posted: Wed Oct 05, 2005 8:40 pm Post subject: |
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| Uncommon wrote: | | I want to not be a part of this. |
Thats not an option. |
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Fenrir-Lunaris
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| Posted: Wed Oct 05, 2005 10:30 pm Post subject: |
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I'd also prefer you not call the characters "Zyrans", as that is a term straight out of TSSE, and holds no context outside of that game. It's A. used to indicate a subspecies of a widespread fantasy race, and B. indicates what planet they're from. Using it in the form you're using is like calling somebody from Berlin a New Yorker. Call them something else.
I believe I had previously indicated this to you, actually. Also, who are you getting to do the graphics for this?
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SilentAngel
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RM, my quote is too generic  . I don't want to be welcoming people to CP  . IM's wife would do more than just welcoming people . (Get your mind out of the gutter, people.  )
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