CastleParadox Vs. BattleBlaze

Battleblaze · Posted: Wed Mar 01, 2006 2:33 pm Post subject:

PHC thank you for the calm headed response.

Like I said the games grammar is a few steps ahead of my post, and the new text edior will make things easy to do.But I can't spell sandwich/samwhic/sanwich right so if you do see an error or too don't hurt me.
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Calehay · Posted: Wed Mar 01, 2006 6:31 pm Post subject:

Battleblaze, maybe you should have someone proofread your script. I agree with PHC 100% on the fact that a game with bad grammar is hard to understand. Maybe you could find someone from your English class or something to read through it. They might even have suggestions about other things too.

It's just, you really don't want to spend all this work (And some of ut looks quite quality. A long way from LOZSOG) and not have people understand what the hell you're talking about.

So, when is this game to be expected?
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I'd be more than glad to go over all your text and fix it up, I'm good with stuff like that.
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Battleblaze · Posted: Thu Mar 02, 2006 12:42 pm Post subject:

Thank you Slimed one.I'll get you an advanced copy when the dmeo is finshed so you can do some grammar touch ups.

Cale all of it is understandable.Unlike LOZSWOG CPVS has been playtested by like 7 people.But yah I'm workin hard to make the game "of quality."

Journal Update:
Stardate 05667.2
I've replayed the first dungeon on the game.The battles were good by OHR standard and has soem stratagy but then I thought about some of the articles I've been readin on CP.Why use all the fancy spells when the normal one would do? So I'm goign through the boss and mini boss levels and adding in some in game theatrics with spawining. Now the games will require a sentient being (as opposed to a textbook on the spacebar) to win the important battles.

I think the textbook test should become an OHR standard.If you can win a battle with a textbook, why play it at all?I keep coming up with new easy to plotscrip ideas that help the story and add an extra coat of polish to the game.
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Battleblaze · Posted: Mon Mar 13, 2006 1:46 pm Post subject:

Journal update:
Man I've been busy with highschool and myspace (not because I love myspace but because I'm meeting more people that go to my school) I've been getting more freind request everyday (from people at school not creepy people in alaska lol).

I went to mah budee Morgan's (yes its a guy) birthday. I was expecting a nerd party but I actually gropped some breast (for the first time without just touching by accident). Ah HighSchool...

CPVS seems to be moving father down on the BB chart.Since I met this girl Jane OHR seems kinda far away (Breast>CP).Spring Break is coming up.Unless I get invited somewhere this should free up CPVS time.

When I do work on it I always get frustrated with the main town map (the CPVS outside maps are tricky because they are all floating towns in the sky). But I consider this a small case of developer's block that I'll get over soon.

Now that the scanner is working again I've been feeling inspired to start making my own manga again (this time with real text has opposed to home-made written). Even though I'm still unkinking the story in my head and doing some practice art (see the art board thread). I feel like I really want to get this out.Why? Quicker and always visable as soon as you do it.And it dosen't require a equipped computer to show people. And I want to do something more deep & meaningful to show people I'm not just the guy who seems like he has a mental disorder in gym class. I'm tired of people writing me off without knowing me. And I'm tired of being another face in the crowd (while in middle school I was one of the greats). I need some indy, self published,freshly inked, power.
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LeRoy_Leo · Posted: Mon Mar 13, 2006 11:28 pm Post subject:

Met a girl, eh? Congratulations. Breasts>OHR, for sure, but OHR is in a league of it's own, man.
Here's the deal.
Don't smother her, or you'll annoy her. Believe me. I've been there. Even if they beg you, you need to make them miss you every now and then. during that time (like usually a few days or so), you can do anything you want and say that yer busy. I'm thinkin' OHR, brother.
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Battleblaze · Posted: Tue Mar 14, 2006 6:58 pm Post subject:

On a side note: Being mounted/stradled (howveer u spell it) feels really good.Even if the girl who does it isnt that hot (it wasn't Jain who was doing the mounting). Everyone wants breath takingly beautiful girls (hell I wuv em) but on that couch when the strobe light was on I wasn't really thinking about that, I was thinking "Jeezuz this feels amazing." Just a sidenote to everyone outthere.
Double Side Note:This dosent count with fat girls because they'll crush you with their ogre like bodies and possibly tire while en route to esex (which i could go for rite now).
Triple Side Note: Lele (Leroy) we aren't really going out yet. I'm in pursuit of and doing quite well.
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LongeBane · Joined: 03 Feb 2003 Posts: 312 Location: Tomorrow

Now now phc, this is his journal and he can talk whatever craaaazzy things he wants to talk about.

The Wobbler · Joined: 06 Feb 2003 Posts: 2221

LongeBane · Joined: 03 Feb 2003 Posts: 312 Location: Tomorrow

Actually, I will have to agree with you.

BattleBlaze in TecEd · Guest

Sorry then. I ddint want to spam the jounrals by updating two journals once and taking up more space than I need to.
PHC dont get all mad.Its not a sex life I just touched some boobs Ha ha ha!

And the thread is still on topic, I was posting about why I've been slacking some on CPVS. (and the other post was just a side note)

I feel my OHR block going away and some new ideas swelling up an inspiring me to continue work...Here we go.

LongeBane · Joined: 03 Feb 2003 Posts: 312 Location: Tomorrow

Read your "on a side note" post. I don't think that's related to why you havn't been able to work on your game....

LeRoy_Leo · Posted: Wed Mar 15, 2006 11:30 am Post subject:

No no. I think the posts were related to the topic in a way.
And PHC is free to state any opinion he feels necessary. BB could always edit/delete anything he wants here, when and if he feels it is needed. Moderator powers over his own journal, ya' know.
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