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B13 · **The holy b13** Joined: 14 Aug 2003 Posts: 11

i have a perfect story for a game i just need help creating it the story is with a man named bee, who comes to face up against the evil deminsion powers of deminous and lord chi who has be watching and waiting for bee this whole time. Bee along with many others n the story comes to face againast other foes and with romance and hatrid ,power, love, and even mysticle have shaped this game .I thought of this game for a long time so thankx. :flamedevil:
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Eggie · Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904

Dynasty Kids...
Achoo!
Hmm...
Is this the game where the people die near the end and leveling up is simply pointless?
The Hive! The Swarm!

DemocraticAnarchist · Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2003 1:08 am Post subject:

Is this guy talking about remaking arfenhouse, or is he serious?
Ok B13, some advice:
1) Learn to spell and use grammar, otherwise people won't take you seriously and wont bother playing your game.
2) It took you a long time to come up with THAT? Dont want to sound harsh, but that is your basic stereotypical rpg storyline. If you have any experience of rpgs, I find it hard to believe you didnt rip that idea. Well, at least there are no crystals/stones of power or the like are there? I hope not. Huh?

3) Do you really think that someone will make your game for you if all you give them is one paragraph that most people around here could come up with in five minutes?
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B13 · **The holy b13** Joined: 14 Aug 2003 Posts: 11

so wat if i cant spell ,i think that no should keep ur opinions to ur self i just wanted to no if people were going to help or not sucka so dont go saying ,"well first i like to say that u suc and u cant spell, i type fast so .!.. ) and eggie thnaks for helping and may urban fantasy do u well. :flamedevil:
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Me · Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2003 8:34 pm Post subject:

Actually, when you don't spell or punctuate your posts very well, it's really hard to read, and thus most folk won't want to take the effort to read your posts. This isn't a chat room, it's a forum. You can take as long as you like typing your posts - no one sits there waiting impatiently for you to say your piece. Usually you won't get a response for an hour or two, anyway. So, please, take a little time and make your posts readable.
And don't say you don't need DA's opinion. You should always find out people's opinions on your game, whether they are good or bad, as usually these opinions will shape whether or not the community actually likes your game.
However, DA was a bit harsh (although he did acknowlege it) in cutting down your story idea so soon. Even if it is a standard RPG storyline, the game still has potential to be good. Story isn't everything, after all. However, the story that you have come up with will cause your originality score to drop considerably. But don't let that get you down! Work hard on your game, and it should turn out fine.
A word of advice, however: take some time and play some of the games that are generally viewed as the "bad" games - ones that got low reviews. I'm serious here; knowing what not to do in terms of game design is a great help. Of course, don't shy away from playing the good games, either - they'll most definitely give you some pointers on good game design. Just try not to steal from those ones (even though it may be tempting), as that will result in your credibility in the community dropping like a stone in the Marianas Trench.
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Eggie · Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904

Believe me, I think Dynasty will be cool. I know a good game when I read a poorly made paragraph. Yo! Bee! You will succeed, if you try. And guys, don't get mad at Bee. He's new. BOOYAKA!

Me · Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2003 7:06 am Post subject:

You have a point, Eggie. Now that I think about it, even the same old RPG storyline (kill the big foozle) can become excellent if it is presented well. You see, the basic storyline of a game is irrelevent when one considers what the player must do to move through the story. If the seemingly unoriginal story is presented in a well though out, articulate, interesting manner, the game will have a good story.
And B, if you have need of a plotscripter, feel free to PM me about it. I'll be happy to help if I can find the time.
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Shadowiii · **It's been real.** Joined: 14 Feb 2003 Posts: 2460

As soon as I can understand that message, I'll think about whatever you are offering. Remember: Period is your friend!
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Eggie · Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904

I wouldn't necessarily get mad at Bee, because we have people all aound that TAHLK LII-KE DEY R FRUM ARFENHOUSE!!!!!11111
Think about it. Is there any improvement to Bee writing compared 2 DISS???!!!!1111///

B13 · **The holy b13** Joined: 14 Aug 2003 Posts: 11

so this guy bee is fighting the evils and has to fight for the world Hive because the evil Devil is coming with his army called"the g-army". So be comes across his friends Resuen(gaurdian angel) and Sinq(is bee's best friend and hes a human just like bee .They are both 17 and have member ships at the hive school of combat. They will there and fight the Devil .There they will meet Kurbone and his Sister Jessie who later on falls in love with jessieand giz whos a litle miget,cloen kinda person who will all be at the Hive school and fight together.so they get ready for battle and fight the evil Devil's army and at the end of the tide he arises and fight all six of them.But bee kilss him.

If you want to hear part1.2 then ask me. and i will give it to yah :flamedevil:
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B13 · **The holy b13** Joined: 14 Aug 2003 Posts: 11

bee goes bac to the hive base and they have a huge party for bee because he has reached a power level that hasnt been seen in like 17 years and so bee's friends mysteriously disappear and then he goes looking for them then gets envolved with a sorcerer.They fight then the sorcerer will throw him in to time portal and bee will meet up with four friends named leon,leo,neo,neon. they tell bee where he is and who is the evil guy who is there and all that crap.Then one of the evil guys shows up so bee sais he can handle this so he does but his four friends come to help and they all kick the crap out of storm the evil man.then bee and his new friends go after storms boss rath the destructer. they fight him but have to go to the castle of omens where bees friends are being held captive in the spirit jar.Bee really doesnt know what to expect because both rath and storm where very strong and he does plan on omen to be even more stronger.well bee beats him and then he releases the spirits of omens jar.but to do that he must first sacrifice 4 souls to bring back 4 souls.so his new 4 friends sacrifice there lives to bring back jessie and giz,kurbone and bee's great pal sinq.But remember Resuen is a gaurdian angel/vampire so he was follwing bee the whole time, in his heart. they all stay in this new world and dont know how to get out but they call the new planet hive. Na d await the evil that will try to conquer the world.
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Me · Posted: Tue Oct 07, 2003 2:49 pm Post subject:

B, while it is excellent that you're getting the story together nicely, we don't really want to know everything that happens during the course of the game. That would sort of ruin any surprises that might happen, and generally make the game less enjoyable.
However, it's very good that you've got a definite story set up.
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LeRoy_Leo · Posted: Tue Oct 07, 2003 11:24 pm Post subject:

I think mixing the plotlines of several other stories is spiffy too... Big grin

GO FOR IT!
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Minnek · Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2003 8:46 am Post subject:

I'll have to agree with LeRoy on this one. It sounds interesting to me, I'd like to see it done (feel free to PM me with a notification of a demo release) Big grin

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