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Lord Fyroa Behold...the mighty Triforce

Joined: 11 Nov 2008 Posts: 63 Location: Lost in this hell called the Water Temple
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Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 5:37 pm Post subject: Lemoria |
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It was raining,how I hated the rain! I walked into the kitchen from my room where I had just awakend. Mother was in the kitchen. "Mother why must it rain?" I asked her. "Because, son it is natures will. Nature has a will? Oh well. Since it's raining I can not go hunting. Perhaps tomorrow. "Mother do you think it will be raining tomarrow?" I asked. "Depends." She answered. "On what?" I asked. "Whether or not it is raining."She said as she smiled at me. Oh mother always joking. "Riok go help your father chop the wood." My mother told me. "Yes ma'am." I replied.
Ill add more later.
Thank you for reading. _________________ Help! Im trapped in this box! It's dark...and cold...help... |
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The Wobbler

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Lord Fyroa Behold...the mighty Triforce

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Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 6:00 pm Post subject: |
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Neither Riok is skilled with special eyes. He can conrol the focus the depth and the zoom. _________________ Help! Im trapped in this box! It's dark...and cold...help... |
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The Wobbler

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8bit Clutcher of toes.

Joined: 01 Jul 2008 Posts: 110 Location: In the thoughts and dreams of all the world's children.
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Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 7:47 pm Post subject: |
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Surlaw wrote: | Is his father Geordi LaForge? |
Speaking of which, this story would make a great Reading Rainbow book. Read by Jonathan Frakes. _________________ Peace and love. Peace and love. No more autographs. Peace and love. |
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Lord Fyroa Behold...the mighty Triforce

Joined: 11 Nov 2008 Posts: 63 Location: Lost in this hell called the Water Temple
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Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 12:01 pm Post subject: |
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When I was done chopping wood, I went inside to read. I grabbed my book, Myths and Ledgends of the Hero Koria.
{What the book says:}
I was in the forest, I lay on the ground bleeding. I had sustained wounds to my right leg, my shoulder and, my chest. The pain. You think youv'e felt pain. Maybe you cut you finger or had a door slamed on some part of you, YOU'VE NEVER FELT PAIN LIKE THIS! The burning searing pain, It felt like my body was on fire. I could'nt walk, breathing hurt. You can't imagine it. "Find any surviviors, and take them as prisoners!" A voice shouted. NO! I won't be taken a prisoner! I won't be taken at all!
A twig snaped. Footsteps. NO! I could see him, he couldn't see me. Yet.
He was maybe five feet away. "Hey I found-
Riok! Come here. Aww. I want'ed to finish. "Mom can I finish the chapter!?" I asked. No come here now! "Yes ma'am." I answered.
Thank You all for reading. Please comment. _________________ Help! Im trapped in this box! It's dark...and cold...help... |
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Calehay ...yeah. Class B Minstrel

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Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 12:59 pm Post subject: Re: Lemoria |
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Lord Fyroa wrote: | It was raining, how I hated the rain! I walked into the kitchen from my room where I had just awakened. Mother was in the kitchen.
"Mother, why must it rain?" I asked her.
"Because, son, it is nature's will."
Nature has a will? Oh well. Since it's raining I can not go hunting. Perhaps tomorrow. "Mother, do you think it will be raining tomorrow?" I asked.
"Depends," she answered.
"On what?" I asked.
"Whether or not it is raining," she said as she smiled at me. Oh, mother always joking. "Riok, go help your father chop the wood," my mother told me.
"Yes, ma'am," I replied.
When I was done chopping wood, I went inside to read. I grabbed my book, Myths and Legends of the Hero Koria:
'I was in the forest, I lay on the ground bleeding. I had sustained wounds to my right leg, my shoulder and, my chest. The pain. You think you've felt pain. Maybe you cut you finger or had a door slammed on some part of you, YOU'VE NEVER FELT PAIN LIKE THIS! The burning searing pain, It felt like my body was on fire. I couldn't walk, breathing hurt. You can't imagine it.
"Find any survivors and take them as prisoners!" A voice shouted.
NO! I won't be taken a prisoner! I won't be taken at all!
A twig snapped. Footsteps. NO! I could see him, he couldn't see me. Yet.
He was maybe five feet away. "Hey I found-'
"Riok! Come here."
Aww. I wanted to finish. "Mom can I finish the chapter!?" I asked.
"No, come here now!"
"Yes, ma'am," I answered.
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The Wobbler

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Lord Fyroa Behold...the mighty Triforce

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Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 4:47 pm Post subject: |
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Sadly Koria has not yet faught the feriocious Yo Ghost.Yet. _________________ Help! Im trapped in this box! It's dark...and cold...help... |
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The Wobbler

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LongeBane

Joined: 03 Feb 2003 Posts: 312 Location: Tomorrow
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Posted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 12:36 am Post subject: |
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Will he have the technology, dexterity, and prowess to be able to lure a live yo ghost out into the open? |
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Lord Fyroa Behold...the mighty Triforce

Joined: 11 Nov 2008 Posts: 63 Location: Lost in this hell called the Water Temple
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Posted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 5:09 pm Post subject: |
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I went down stairs to where my mom was. "What is it mother? You interupted me, I was in the middle of my book." I told her. "Was it the Bible?" She asked. "No ma'am." I answered. "Then it's not important." She said. Yes ma'am. Riok will you go start the fire, so I can cook supper?
Of course mother.
When I was done I went upstairs to finish. Now where was I?
Ah yes.
A twig snaped. Footsteps. NO! I could see him, he couldn't see me. Yet.
He was maybe five feet away. "Hey I found one!" The soldier shouted.
I tried to stand. "AHHGH!" I screamed in pain. My leg must be broke. "Here I'll help you." Another soldier came to help him. They picked me up. "Never I won't go! LET ME GO!" I screamed. "Shut up!" The soldier who had my legs spat. I kept squirming even though it hurt. "Fine!" They dropped me. I hit the ground. Hard. I tried to crawl away. I couldn't, it hurt too much. "I'll knock him out." The soldier said. "WHAT?" I thaught.
Everything went black. I was unconsious.
Please comment some more. _________________ Help! Im trapped in this box! It's dark...and cold...help... |
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LongeBane

Joined: 03 Feb 2003 Posts: 312 Location: Tomorrow
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Posted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 6:11 pm Post subject: |
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Hmm... I'm a bit confused here. What does this have anything to do with yo ghost? Cut the foreplay man, I want action. |
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Lord Fyroa Behold...the mighty Triforce

Joined: 11 Nov 2008 Posts: 63 Location: Lost in this hell called the Water Temple
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Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2008 3:30 pm Post subject: |
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When I awoke, I found myself in a brown room. The entrace was open, exept the bars that blocked the way. There was no window. No. Thay had taken me as a prisoner! Possibly a slave! Thare has to be a way out! There has to be! "Hello!" I yelled. "Hello? Someone answer me!" I screamed. "Shut up!" Someone yelled. Sound like from the cell across from mine. "Shut up, or the gaurd will come!" He said in a low voice. "What is this place?" I asked. "The arena. It's where the Orvag's army gets slaves to fight each other to the death. The winner's family will survive. The only way out is to keep winning." He told me. "Tell me more." I asked. He only said. "I will not become your friend or feel anything for, you. We may have to fight. I will not loose her!" He yelled.
I heard somthing. Footsteps. A guard. He approached my cell. Your next. Come on. _________________ Help! Im trapped in this box! It's dark...and cold...help... |
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Lord Fyroa Behold...the mighty Triforce

Joined: 11 Nov 2008 Posts: 63 Location: Lost in this hell called the Water Temple
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Posted: Fri Mar 27, 2009 10:29 am Post subject: |
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" Where are you taking me?" I screamed at the guard " Shut up prisoner! " He spat at me and hit me in the back with the flat side of his spear. "Ow!" I decided at that point that I should shut up. He walked me down a dark corridor. He opend up a door, I was greeted with a bright blinding light. I had to squint to see. " At yer feet should be a wepen." He slurred as he pushed me into the light.
Sorry guys Im a little short on time Ill finish soon.  _________________ Help! Im trapped in this box! It's dark...and cold...help... |
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