Castle Paradox

[Snow_fox]

I did these for class... I actually didn't feel like drawing the people but I wanted to draw the clothes.


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[jabbercat]

The bottom drawing's dress is very lush! Good stuff.
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[Blue Pixel]

your shading is amazing.
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[Lucier]

these are looking better and better each time you post. although, there are quite a few problems with the proportions of the bodies:

first drawing- head is too small for body. legs are far too long for body (think about how much of her legs should be covered up by that dress.. you should only be able to see a little bit of her thigh, but you are showing the entire thing). feet are too small for body. feet must be able to hold up an entire person, so the taller the person is, the larger the feet must be.
second drawing- head is much, much too small for body.

i'd also like to see you work on drawing hands more. i can see you conveniently drew the second woman's arms behind her back so you wouldn't have to worry about the hands. i used to do this and because of that, it took me so much longer to finally be able to draw hands well.
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[Newbie_Power]

So much good shading and detail...

The bottom picture's face bothers me, though. Her facial features are way too low on the face, making her forehead look gigantic and turning her into a quasi-conehead.

Try raising the eyes and eyebrow, then shortening the hair so that you cover less of the forehead, getting the result you want.
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[Snow_fox]

I actually draw decent hands... it's just when it get smaller hands are harder to draw DX and yes I agree the face is odd and what not, but as I said XP I really just wanted to do the outfits haha
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