Castle Paradox

Setu_Firestorm

I just thought I'd post this up for the hay of it. My boss at Palm Harbor Natural Foods knew I like to draw when I'm bored, so he gave me a task: To design a new sign for "Register Closed" to replace the bland ones we had. So, he asked for it to be something goofy, but look homemade, (so I just tried to make something good looking, knowing it would end up lacking in the end anyway Raspberry!

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So, here's what I came up with:

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Rpeanut · Posted: Sat Jan 08, 2005 11:13 am Post subject:

Looks..err...ummm..nice. Very simple style, is that`lump in the corner a tirefire?
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Sparoku · Posted: Sat Jan 08, 2005 12:25 pm Post subject:

That's so cute. It looks like you've improved too.
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LeRoy_Leo · Posted: Sat Jan 08, 2005 1:05 pm Post subject:

Noice. The neck looks a little better. The smoke coming out of the fire is pretty detailed.

The fire and his shoulders could use some work. For the fire, I suggest making it "reach". Fire reaches. You noticed that, no doubt.

As for the shoulders, they belong on a bigger person. They may be a bit too broad for this little guy. I say that because of the proportions from the neck to the shoulders. Narrow them in a little bit, bud. Happy

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Joe Man · Posted: Sat Jan 08, 2005 3:29 pm Post subject:

I have a better idea:

SO GO TO ANOTHER REGISTER

like it?
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LeRoy_Leo · Posted: Sat Jan 08, 2005 4:58 pm Post subject:

I don't know... Not too many of the older audience will catch the DBZ reference. In fact, that might actually give some old geezer a heart attack.

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Setu_Firestorm · Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2005 1:27 pm Post subject:

Haha, Joe Man. That would be awesome, but I had to do something original.

And the flaming pile of rubble is what is left of Register 1, as you can see the "1" behind the smoke.
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