Castle Paradox

Eggie · Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904

There is only one word to describe this drawing... Smokin'

This is my most recent drawing. I concentrated on posture, and proportion. Do you think his posture's good? Is his head good? Do you think the 'Shallow Max' lettering is disturbing. Well guess what? Max IS shallow. This is my friend Max. He is smoking dope.

Also, this is supposed to be very flat, and I know you can't see the right arm and leg.

There is only one word to describe this drawing... Smokin'

Actually, this is out hero, Ryan, as a wolf. I made him a furry, and a furry furry at that. I drew this one before Shallow Max up there.
He's smoking because I felt like giving him something to smoke. Whatever. Anyway, nevermind the blurred out words to the side, and try to look at his posture. Do you think that's good posture? Is it unrealistic.

Uncommon · Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2004 2:45 pm Post subject:

Max: His eye is weird and his legs are way too long. Also, the way he's holding the cigarette is messed up.

Ryan: Looking better than the other one, but his hand is way too small and looks just as messed up as Max's. His foot looks like it's at a bad angle, and I think he needs lips. Also, I'm not feeling it with that hair.
Still, Ryan looks better than most of your pictures.

Eggie · Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904

Uncommon · Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2004 6:38 pm Post subject:

Don't make the legs any longer. I just told you they're already too long.
And rules or no rules, those hands look messed up.

What I'm not feeling from Max's eye is the shape. It just doesn't seem to fit. Like you said, he's stoned (so that's a joint instead of a cigarette? my mistake), so I would think his eye might be half-closed. It's just too big, I guess.
Otherwise, his head's okay, except for his ear. It's in the right spot, but the shape is really weird.

Eggie · Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904

Sorry, I misread. Now I understand. If anything, I thought they would've been to short.