Castle Paradox

Hunter Green

I've been trying to work on the structure of Dewclaw's legs (joints, and where they should be placed)
So I drew a wireframe. and then i drew a more finished version of the same pose. And for your convienince, I put them both in the same image.

http://dothate.250free.com/Hunterpics/Dewclawwireframe.JPG

(You know you love it)
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Grandtrain · Joined: 02 Feb 2003 Posts: 85

I always love seeing a drawing from outline to the final product. It looks good. The only thing I would recommend is to include the elbows and knees.

RedMaverickZero · Posted: Mon Nov 24, 2003 6:52 am Post subject:

Not bad. But it's rare I see people actually use the scale to draw. Nice. But nothing more practice can't help you know. Heck, practice makes perfect!
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Eggie · Joined: 12 May 2003 Posts: 904

The facial expression is done very well, the texture in the hair and fur are done also well. Her bottom paws seem to be a little polygonical, but the clothes are very well done. Her body shape is relatively normal, so I say this once again. It's awesome, but it's not... sensational.

Roach Lir · Joined: 08 Jul 2003 Posts: 119 Location: United Kingdom

It's really good!
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Lucier · Posted: Mon Nov 24, 2003 10:52 am Post subject:

It's good, but the finished one's body doesn't look quite right. I was messing around in MSPaint and came up with this...

Notice how her torso curves outward. If it doesn't, then she wouldn'tbe balanced and would fall over. You also might want to make her lower stomach/hips curve outward more too, for extra balance.
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Hunter Green · Posted: Mon Nov 24, 2003 1:09 pm Post subject:

Yeah, I see what you're saying, my pose does look a bit unbalanced. I think that I did to the torso curve you were talking about, but I didn't pronounce the hips enough. I'll keep that in mind for future sketches.
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Hunter Green · Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2003 11:18 pm Post subject:

BIZ to the UMP
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Synial · Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2003 12:35 pm Post subject:

This is kinda off topic, but your hair really reminds me of Johnny Ramone. I'm sorry, but it was really bugging me and I had to say something.

PS - To the drawing, I really like the facial espression.
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Hunter Green · Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2003 1:02 pm Post subject:

's cool, not the first time I've been told I look like a Ramone.
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Hunter Green · Posted: Thu Jan 01, 2004 12:00 pm Post subject:

It is a ninja thread bump.
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Captain Action · Posted: Thu Jan 01, 2004 12:11 pm Post subject:

Giant X-Acto knife battles = <3<3<3
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Fenrir-Lunaris · **WUT** Joined: 03 Feb 2003 Posts: 1747

This is all to lure what's his name to post about it in an attempt to make the connection between him and another Forum troll, right? Just checking.

And Pen-war has been my province since at least 2000, as evidenced in this [strikeout]slightly erotic[/strikeout] furry CRAP art here:

http://www.castleparadox.com/fenart/Horrible/fenpen.JPG

RedMaverickZero · Posted: Thu Jan 01, 2004 8:38 pm Post subject:

Cool looking picture HunterGreen. The posture looks nice but you should work on feet. Everything else looks great. Kinda looks cartoony which reminds me of my own style. Looks good though.
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Hunter Green · Posted: Thu Jan 01, 2004 8:52 pm Post subject:

Yeah, I do need to wrok on feet... they should have been longer.

And Fen, I did bump this thread in an attempt to cacth the attention of a certain troll, but I'm also planning to start updateing it with art periodicially.
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