Castle Paradox

Mushitori Okuro · Joined: 01 Jun 2003 Posts: 43 Location: South Florida

Well, I edited this because I dont know if its agaisnt contest rules or not to show if online, so I took down the preview.

If I lose in the competition, Ill post all 20 pages on the internet.

If I win... well, the only way to read it would be to buy Tokyopops Anthology. X_X The winners stories get compiled into a book.

Shadowiii · **It's been real.** Joined: 14 Feb 2003 Posts: 2460

Interesting approach. I look forward to the next panels. Is this an environmentally statement-making...comic...yeah...?

Sweet.
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Grandtrain · Joined: 02 Feb 2003 Posts: 85

Very nice. That first panel, though, could be made at a more interesting angle.

Mushitori Okuro · Joined: 01 Jun 2003 Posts: 43 Location: South Florida

Hmmm, is this a good beggining to an action comic then? Maybe I should have cut this part out and cut to the chase by starting where one of the villians appeared, because that first page only shows that the hero lives outside the city but works there. @_@

Mushitori Okuro · Joined: 01 Jun 2003 Posts: 43 Location: South Florida

delete this post, mod

Mushitori Okuro · Joined: 01 Jun 2003 Posts: 43 Location: South Florida

delete this post

Me · Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2003 7:29 am Post subject:

To save you from some potentially viscious bashing by someone, I feel the urge to tell you this: Use the "Edit" button to edit on those extra posts, rather than making an entire new one. Triple posting is rather . . . evil.
But that's a really nice comic you got going there. Keep it up!
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Mushitori Okuro · Joined: 01 Jun 2003 Posts: 43 Location: South Florida

Ok, I'll edit the first post.

Edit: I can't seem to delete the two consecutive posts above yours, but this one for some reason is deleteable.

Grandtrain · Joined: 02 Feb 2003 Posts: 85

The art is nice, but all three pages seem to have NOTHING to do with each other.

Melnazar · Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2003 5:33 am Post subject:

I have to admit, I'm really impressed...and..why are they doomed?
I really liked the word games in the comic.. fwe he he a-store..
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Chaz VanLanden · Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2003 2:41 am Post subject:

KKKKOOOOOLLLLLL.... HEE HEE HEE.... It's very well done...
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Mushitori Okuro · Joined: 01 Jun 2003 Posts: 43 Location: South Florida

I got 9 pages up now. Thats nearly 50% of the 20 pages.

Tell me what you think of the story now that I have 9 pages up.

Grandtrain · Joined: 02 Feb 2003 Posts: 85

I was kind of lost for the first four pages. Afterward, though, everything did come together and it was a great read. Can't wait until you are finish.

Mushitori Okuro · Joined: 01 Jun 2003 Posts: 43 Location: South Florida

Ive drawn more pages, but should I scan them, I dont know, cause of the rules and stuff of the contest... If I lose Ill post all on the internet, if I win... the story would go in an anthology book thing. X_X I know I can make it at least runner up! If I ink it, it increase its niceness. I know I can do this! I like the story! Its all cool! I can make it! Got 10 days left! X_X